tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183016409485019207.post6133032009169972093..comments2023-08-16T10:28:31.921+01:00Comments on Dark Gothic Poetry: 28Florence Challenderhttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00486672644020692109noreply@blogger.comBlogger9125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183016409485019207.post-23015313465764712512012-07-26T14:42:34.621+01:002012-07-26T14:42:34.621+01:00Lovely poem, it leaves a wonderful scent in the ai...Lovely poem, it leaves a wonderful scent in the air as you read it. Good use of contrasts also. Please visit my blog as well:<br /><br />gestaltdesschattens.blogspot.com<br /><br />Make your visit noticeable by sharing your insight about the poems you likeVincent Malkavianhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02550091631432758024noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183016409485019207.post-15768099499138932072011-10-06T04:21:44.801+01:002011-10-06T04:21:44.801+01:00BeautifulAnd Rach LOL! ANd love the poem 2!BeautifulAnd Rach LOL! ANd love the poem 2!Larkyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04677731842409590271noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183016409485019207.post-91118095197326018722011-05-09T08:41:16.688+01:002011-05-09T08:41:16.688+01:00I watch you fall.
I watch you cry.
I watch you ach...I watch you fall.<br />I watch you cry.<br />I watch you ache.<br />I watch you die.<br /><br />I watch you bleed.<br />I watch you now.<br />I don't sprint for help;<br />I know I'm a cow.<br /><br />I watch you stutter;<br />You need help.<br />You look at me,<br />And then you yelp.<br /><br />I watch you sob.<br />I watch you hurt.<br />I don't help you;<br />Your name is Kurt.<br /><br />Once before,<br />In this very same spot,<br />You stood watching me,<br />You didn't give a toss.<br /><br />You watched me fall.<br />You watched me cry.<br />You watched me ache.<br />You watched me die.<br /><br />- just a poem wrote about a guy called Kurt - go figure - who is very mean. But when I was cutting myself - I do that alot (i'm a bit of an emo) - in the playground, and I cut further down than intended and got rushed to hospital. This guy Kurt just stood there laughing. So then, couple of days later, he fell over this rusty nail and had to be rushed to hospital. While he was screaming and crying and writhing in pain, I just stood there, a smirk on my face. I might be mean, but I enjoy revenge.Red-Headed Pythonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725628519301292158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183016409485019207.post-35143902130914008562011-05-09T08:39:00.169+01:002011-05-09T08:39:00.169+01:00This comment has been removed by the author.Red-Headed Pythonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02725628519301292158noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183016409485019207.post-10910606563375298932011-04-21T23:45:59.738+01:002011-04-21T23:45:59.738+01:00Your writing is intense and lyrical. Love it!Your writing is intense and lyrical. Love it!S. A. Soule, Creativity Coachhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07345161433926665847noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183016409485019207.post-60258420783562462292011-04-09T01:18:46.226+01:002011-04-09T01:18:46.226+01:00Love is foolish excuse for failure
Failure to brea...Love is foolish excuse for failure<br />Failure to break away from this agony<br />You burned my innocence<br />Tormented my fragile soul<br />This gay love is far from reality<br />Staged your emotions just to lay with me<br />You were my best buddy<br />Now you are my worst enemy<br /><br />-- just a simple, dark, painful truth dedicated to my ex boyfriend.<br /><br />UknownAnthony Riverahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08414708442969384711noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183016409485019207.post-19095269433949110172011-02-24T21:27:41.505+00:002011-02-24T21:27:41.505+00:00Wow- I expected you would be good, but that's ...Wow- I expected you would be good, but that's actually awe-inspiring! (It's Fern by the way :D)<br />Bloody brilliant stuff- i wish you all the best getting published- if I find any good contacts (bloody unlikely but there you go!) I will definitely put a word in :D xAngry Beigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12336528510902918465noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183016409485019207.post-58317374649835933642011-02-18T20:07:54.131+00:002011-02-18T20:07:54.131+00:00i agreei agreeBleeding poetryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01048365104739188000noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-1183016409485019207.post-45252930234968543542011-02-09T03:16:12.088+00:002011-02-09T03:16:12.088+00:00salacious is a lovely wordsalacious is a lovely wordPoetry of the Dayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11198064593715494884noreply@blogger.com